Report on Paragraph-- Spring 2001

	Raw scores     6     7   8     10-11
	Adjusted       4     5   6      8 

Picture selection. Some work better than others. While a skillful execution might save almost anything, in retrospect, some pictures were not appropriate for general audience.

Good chance
Any simple physical device (scanning tunneling microscope
Any new physical effect (continuum generation)
Any kind of theory
Even good picture that required too much previous knowledge (magnet floating above superconductor)

Common weaknesses in paragraph writing