Style: Ten Lessons in Clarity and Grace
J M Williams, U Chicago Press, 1997
What is written without effort is in general read without
pleasure. --Samuel Johnson
- Thoughtful: your readers probably know less than you do about
your subject, and so you must be clearer than you think you need to be.
- Correct: Write not as the grammarians say you must write,
but as writers you admire actually write.
- Clear: Put your important characters in subjects, then join
them those subjects with verbs that name their specific actions.
- Cohesive: Arrange the flow of information in each sentence so
that you move readers from information that is familiar to them
to information that is new.
- Coherent: Begin series of sentences in a unified passage in a
consistent way, with words that your readers will think constitute a
reasonable unified set of ideas. Do not begin sentences randomly.
- Emphatic: End your sentences on your rhetorically most
salient, most powerful words. (Translation: emphasis at end of
sentence.)
- Pointed: Cut, cut again, then cut once more.
- Flowing: Preserve the connections between major grammatical
parts:
- Avoid long subjects;
- Avoid interrupting the connections between subject-verb and
verb-object.
- If you must interrupt, interrupt with only a single work or short
phrase.
- Shapely:
- Keep introductory clauses and phrases short.
- Keep subjects short.
- Create coordinated structures after short subjects.
- Avoid tacking a clause or phrase of any kind onto another just like
it, and especially avoid tacking on a third one.
- Elegant: Create balanced and parallel phrases and clauses
after the subject; in those phrases and clauses, echo one another's
sounds, structures and ideas.