Comments on Topic-Sentence Outline (& figures)

original tso

THM: maybe point 1 or 9 below.

This was TSO for team with each member responsible for 2+ TS.

jww revised tso

THM Solar can supplment peak power since the sun shines then and its price ...

Another sample

THM Wind energy is effective because it (1) is a clean energy source; (2) it can be a cost effective resource that (3) technology has been improving.

Comments on Figures

Lettering should be large -- 18 pt. For vertical axis, parallel to horizontal.

Avoid colors as sole identification;
Supplement with unique symbol or line struture (dashed, dashed-dot, etc.).
Try to put word label close to the line or part of pie chart or ...

Caption should have the point of the figure.

sample


Your comments and suggestions are appreciated.

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