Aristoi
centers around the aristos
Gabriel, to whom is revealed a plot to subvert the flow of information
in the empire, and whose investigations into this plot lead ultimately
mankind into a new age of growth. The current age began when the
original Earth was consumed in a mataglap accident--nanotech that
consumes its surroundings by reproducing itself endlessly. To
avoid this, the use of nanotech is goverend by aristoi, an elite class of mankind that has
passed rigorous tests and is proven to be reliable primarily in creating
nanotech without errors and with mastering the use of daimones, schizophrenic
personalities that are used as servant personalities to advise and
perform unconscious action. The aristoi are the absolute
rulers of their domaine (several star systems) but collectively govern
the known habitations of Man.
This society lives in freedom from almost all disease, with a usual
lifespan of a couple hundred years before the body rejects its
stabilizers and spontaneously breaks down. Although it is possible
to live millenia, only the first two aristos
appear to have avoided the breakdown. It is a structured society,
conditioned through the educational system to respect authority.
This is accomplished through the discoveries of Captain Yuan, the first aristos, who observed that the mind
and the emotions are affected by images. To this end he developed
a set of stances (the Posture of Formal Regard, for instance), various
hand gestures (most notably the Mudras of Approval, Teaching, and
Domination), and a system of ideographs whose visible forms affected the
mind and emotions of the reader. The population is relatively
stagnant, with only a few children permitted, so they are generally
raised by multiple (more than two) parents. Since love is
enlightened in these modern times, lovers of the same gender is
unextraordinary, and some men even opt to become pregnant through
implantation.
The foundation of the modern society is free use of knowledge by all
and when an older ariste
(female form of aristos)
discovers that the repository of that knowledge (the original Moon) is
being tampered with, against all possibility, she warns her neighbor,
Gabriel. Shortly afterwards the ariste
Cressida is killed in a mataglap "accident", which Gabriel presumes to
have been caused by the aristos
Saigo whom Cressida suspected of falsifying data. Gabriel builds
an alternate communication system and storage unit and sets out for
Saigo's domaine to determine what he is hiding that requires alteration
of star-system survey data.
Gabriel discovers an experiment in progress--an experiment where
mankind is replicated in its Renaissance state, complete with false
history, sickness, and paltry standards of living. The experiment
is headed by Captain Yuan, the first Aristos,
who legend says left mankind to find the center of the galaxy. In
reality he left because he abhorred the security that mankind had
created, which did not foster uniqueness or creativity. Gabriel
discovers this only in captivity where he is brainwashed to serve
Captain Yuan's purposes instead of fulfilling his desire of liberating
the people from their miserable state and giving them the peace,
security, and freedom from disease that the rest of mankind
enjoys. Fortunately, a rogue daimon
of his saves the day by hacking Captain Yuan's computers while Gabriel
isn't paying attention and the Saigo and the beautiful ariste Zhenling (who was Gabriel's
virtual lover to get information of his plans) are brought to
justice. Captain Yuan eludes capture and Gabriel ends the
narrative by leaving in search of him.
Aristoi fails to rise above
mediocrity. Although the diamones
are an interesting idea, as is the technique of the mental conversations
with (and between) the diamones
written in parallel with the main narrative, few new ideas present
themselves. The plot, while interesting enough to be read in one
sitting, progresses in a straight line with no real turns and the
appearance of Captain Yuan is unsurprising as the repeated assertions of
the unknown status of his trip to the center of the galaxy beg for his
introduction. The timeline is a little dubious, as Saigo's
publication suggesting that a star in his domaine is unstable is rather
recent, while Captain Yuan's disappearance appears to have taken place
many years ago. The fact that only the first two aristoi have lived for millienia
while everyone else spontaneously dies after a few centuries suggests
that Captain Yuan needed to live a long time for the plot and that
another aristos needed to have
survived to make it remotely plausible.
The portrayal of society appears to be an implementation of the usual
science fiction ideals--freedom from disease and troublesome
conservative morals through information and human development--with no
depth given beyond these assertions. Far from being a paragon of
humanity, the aristoi appear to
lead a life of leisure, occasionally tending to the task of
administration, but generally parading at parties in the style of Louis
XIV, satiating their lust, and occasionally dashing off gems of art in
their spare time. Gabriel spends approximately half of the book
seduced in virtual trysts with Zhenling, doing the same (except in
reality) with his (female) lover Clancy, or with visits to his
longstanding (male) love, Marcus, who is having their child. The
female relationships, especially that with Zhenling, appear to be based
mostly on lust and somehow Clancy, against all historical evidence
suggesting that she might become jealous of Marcus or the virtual
Zhenling, is just fine with Gabriel having multiple lovers. And
while every trend has been that humans make mistakes, aristoi apparently never make
mistakes with nanotech, and can safely be gatekeepers of that dangerous
tool.
Williams has created a novel that simply lacks believability. The
society is thoughtlessly stolen from various Chinese influences and
modern moral ideas with little attempt at portraying cultural
differences or individual failure. The plot is predictable and
unoriginal at the macro level (although the idea of
aristoi and the use of the
schizophrenic
diamones that
"once only saints or lunatics knew" is orginal, at least to me).
The
aristoi, or at least
Aristos Gabriel, fail to demonstrate
laudable character. In short,
Aristoi
sits comfortably among the rest of the unoriginal consumable science
fiction.
Review: 6
Written in a very casual style.
Too much unnecessary sex. Unbelievable attitudes.
Unconvincing aristoi.
Simple plot. However, since I read the book in practically one
setting, it does have some story-telling merit.
Interesting ideas
- The use of schizophrenic daimones
as servants, advisors, and friends.
- Mataglap: nanotech that continues "eating" and reproducing
without stop. Not terribly realistic, since nothing, not even
viruses as that successful, but interesting.
- Hollowing out of asteroids and the moon as data storage centers
- Nano-tech "software": libraries of battleships, etc. ready
to be created with just a command to execute.
- The idea that we are affected by what we see--Postures, Mudras,
characters. Probably not true to the extent Williams describes
(being unnerved by an unfamiliar Mudra of Domination, for example), but
at least this corresponds somewhat to reality.
- A Workshop that produces real handmade goods instead of
mass-produced ones.
People
Gabriel
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Fairly new (80 years) aristos. Prefers artistic
things; is an architect. Prefers hands off, democratic
rule. Has a long-standing (male) love affair with Marcus, who is
carrying their child and for whom he built a beautiful house.
Doesn't usually have relationships lasting over a month or so with
women, although Clancy looks like it might be more lasting. Is not
married.
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Clancy
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A doctor by trade. Is
smart, but not quite ariste
material. During the trip, her association with an aristos (Gabriel) causes her to be
able to combine her knowledge and skills in a way that suggests she will
eventually become an ariste.
Designs a new nanotech container. Is a lover of Gabriel, although
she is not described as having much intensity. Does not object to
Gabriel's other lovers.
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Cressida
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Ariste
of a neighboring domaine. Scientifically oriented; lived on
a small asteroid. Copied Saigo's data and then discovered that the
main data had been altered. Alerts Gabriel shortly before she is
killed in a mataglap accident.
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Zhenling
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Young, beautiful ariste. Seduces Gabriel (who
was doing the same to her) to maintain information about him. Is
helping Captain Yuan because she, too, believes that humanity is
stagnating.
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Captain Yuan
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The first aristos. Developed Postures,
Mudras, characters. Is practically a superhuman because he created
the system that the others live in and are controlled by. Built
backdoors into the main information systems. Believes that
humanity has stagnated in security so he secretly develops an alternate
humanity which is left to evolve by itself from a Renaissance society,
under the guise of leaving to explore the center of the galaxy. Is
immune to Gabriel's attacks and it is suggested that Gabriel must become
like him in order to defeat him.
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Marcus
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(Male) lover of Gabriel.
Is destroyed when Gabriel's ship is destroyed.
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Saigo
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Aristos
of a sparsely populated domaine. Published a study determining
that a star was unstable and therefore unsuitable for colonization.
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Spring Plum, Welcome Rain,
Mataglap
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Daimones
of Gabriel
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Copyright © 2003 by Geoffrey
Prewett